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complexbrother
11-28-2005, 09:21 AM
Cradled between your tender thighs
I lift you to my mouth.
The abundance of your wetness greets me
and my mouth overflows with your warm essence.
Your sweet taste is on my tongue
and your fragrance delights my senses.
No gentle lick this visit.
No bashful cautious approach
For I wish to consume you.
Push against my hungry mouth
As the tip of my tongue slides up the slippery furrow
that welcomes me between rows of delicate pink petals.
Thrust against my generous tongue.
Show me the power of your desire
for my oral caress.
My exploring tongue lifts the hood
and finds your smooth firm pearl.
You squeal in that unique way,
signaling that I have found your special spot.
I harden in response.
My jaws protests what my open mouth provides
but I am unrelenting in my gift,
intent only on your fulfillment.
I feel your body tense,
and you are quiet now...
Concentrating... bearing down.
Soon now my love,
ecstasy approaches.
You push hard and fast against my tongue,
shameless in using me
and I so willingly comply
until you cry out...
and in your satisfaction,
I will find mine,
But mine will be the greater.
mirage
12-03-2005, 09:05 AM
wow. this was real good. the topic drew me in and the imagery kept me interested. very nice post :)
complexbrother
12-03-2005, 09:36 AM
Thanks
marauder
12-05-2005, 10:37 AM
captivating indeed!
RogueMage
12-06-2005, 04:01 AM
More please...!
Namasté,
RM
miss-myesha
12-21-2005, 07:23 PM
that was hot :10:
complexbrother
12-31-2005, 10:29 AM
Thank you all for the positive reviews of my art.
antoine66
01-01-2006, 01:16 AM
That was dope........
RAWDUDE
02-03-2006, 06:57 PM
from one who appreciates poetry ,good work man,subject matter intriguing indeed,original
Saundman
02-04-2006, 10:23 PM
:41: :41: :41:
young_hef
02-12-2006, 05:02 PM
good shit
daveyraw
03-23-2006, 10:16 AM
that was hot
Jamaicanbwoydre
04-16-2006, 02:43 PM
Feeling those verses, her pleasure is an even greater pleasure for you. Thats how it should be.
lovees
05-13-2006, 02:24 PM
wow
lovees
05-13-2006, 02:24 PM
had to read it again
Diamond.Dog
06-10-2006, 06:03 PM
l o l
Bettie_Brown
06-13-2006, 07:31 PM
Just lick it, n*gga!
Just joking. That was really hot... and I am really open.
brooklynrocks
06-26-2006, 02:17 PM
Thank you all for the positive reviews of my art.
liar.
brooklynrocks
06-26-2006, 02:18 PM
[Chris Rock]
You ain't gotta lie ta kick it
complexbrother
06-27-2006, 07:15 PM
What do you mean ?
brooklynrocks
06-27-2006, 11:19 PM
I mean you're trying to pass this work off as your own. it's not. Therefore you're a liar.
PinkPanther82
07-11-2006, 09:08 PM
That was deep. Do you have more? Bring it on, if so.
complexbrother
07-12-2006, 09:44 PM
I mean you're trying to pass this work off as your own. it's not. Therefore you're a liar.
Brother pleese :14: , I have been posting my poetry on UVP and various others sites and this one since it's conception, take the time to look up some fact b4 you make yourself look imbecilic and juvenile .:30:
brooklynrocks
07-18-2006, 10:23 PM
Ok when you rip shit off... try to do it from someone
a) who is not a published author... b) a doctor c) who published their poem on their website.
I'm not sure if being a regular liar is better or worse than a stupid one.
The Oral Caress
by
Robert W. Birch
Copyright 2001
Robert W. Birch, Ph.D.
Robert W. Birch, Ph.D., Retired Marital & Sex Therapist, 35 years as a psychologist specializing in building sensual, intimate, and loving relationships. Clinician, lecturer, workshop leader, and author of nine books.
Author's website: http://oralcaress.com/poem.htm
http://www.amazon.com/gp/search/002-9493838-2296821?search-alias=aps&keywords=Robert%20W.%20Birch
http://www.enotalone.com/authors.php?aid=17
http://www.enotalone.com/img/partners/17.gif
This fucking dude must have copied your shit from uvp, right:lol Cause it makes sense that old dude like that plagiarized from you.
Here's another one of "yours":
Bodyscape
by
Robert W. Birch
Copyright 2001
From where I lie, nestled between your tender thighs
I see stretching out before me
the spectacular landscape of your beautiful body.
My nose is surrounded by the untrimmed bush
that sprouts upon a bony ridge.
Unseen, my tongue has found the fountain of your womanhood
and your earthy taste is sweet within my mouth.
My eyes travel across the flat plain of your soft stomach,
lingering at that shallow crater
where a small gold ring decorates the rim most distant from me.
It is a rolling meadow to the lush foothills of your breasts.
Small firm mountains, a matched set,
twin peaks each topped with its own perky nipple
sitting alert as though calling out for attention.
Beyond the mountains your chest and neck
display the warm reddish flush that signals your arousal,
like flowers announcing the coming of spring.
My eyes travel over your chin, finding full lips
that reveal nothing of your intense inner pleasure,
save a small upturning of each corner.
Your eyes are tightly closed as you look deep within.
Golden hair provides a wispy frame for your lovely face
as you are swept up in the avalanche of your arousal.
Your face reveals no recognition of my presence,
for you are swallowed up in the ecstacy of your sexual pleasures.
As I now concentrate on my pleasure in giving to you,
I close my eyes, for I have captured the landscape of your body.
Your indelible image is imprinted on my mind
and in fantasy, I will swallow you up.
My mouth will consume you, taking you in
and you becoming a part of me and I of you
until the plains heave up, the mountains shake,
and the bodyscape before me erupts with the fury
buried within the deepest strata of your passionate soul.
You don't have have to lie to kick it.
complexbrother
07-19-2006, 04:11 PM
I don't know what you are reading but that is not my poem. read mine then read his . 2 diffrent poems.
just because the 2 have the same subject matter doen not make them the same. posting this just showes how intellectually limited and hatefilled you are.
you know they say an empty wagon makes the most noise.
admin
07-25-2006, 09:57 PM
Wow . . .I went to Robert Birch's website and your poem was there, its name was Oral Caress. I mean word for word, its the exact same poem. . .What's up with that?
complexbrother
07-26-2006, 12:59 PM
:crazy: *Sigh*
his poem ..
Bodyscape
by
Robert W. Birch
Copyright 2001
From where I lie, nestled between your tender thighs
I see stretching out before me
the spectacular landscape of your beautiful body.
My nose is surrounded by the untrimmed bush
that sprouts upon a bony ridge.
Unseen, my tongue has found the fountain of your womanhood
and your earthy taste is sweet within my mouth.
My eyes travel across the flat plain of your soft stomach,
lingering at that shallow crater
where a small gold ring decorates the rim most distant from me.
It is a rolling meadow to the lush foothills of your breasts.
Small firm mountains, a matched set,
twin peaks each topped with its own perky nipple
sitting alert as though calling out for attention.
Beyond the mountains your chest and neck
display the warm reddish flush that signals your arousal,
like flowers announcing the coming of spring.
My eyes travel over your chin, finding full lips
that reveal nothing of your intense inner pleasure,
save a small upturning of each corner.
Your eyes are tightly closed as you look deep within.
Golden hair provides a wispy frame for your lovely face
as you are swept up in the avalanche of your arousal.
Your face reveals no recognition of my presence,
for you are swallowed up in the ecstacy of your sexual pleasures.
As I now concentrate on my pleasure in giving to you,
I close my eyes, for I have captured the landscape of your body.
Your indelible image is imprinted on my mind
and in fantasy, I will swallow you up.
My mouth will consume you, taking you in
and you becoming a part of me and I of you
until the plains heave up, the mountains shake,
and the bodyscape before me erupts with the fury
buried within the deepest strata of your passionate soul.
my poem.....
Cradled between your tender thighs
I lift you to my mouth.
The abundance of your wetness greets me
and my mouth overflows with your warm essence.
Your sweet taste is on my tongue
and your fragrance delights my senses.
No gentle lick this visit.
No bashful cautious approach
For I wish to consume you.
Push against my hungry mouth
As the tip of my tongue slides up the slippery furrow
that welcomes me between rows of delicate pink petals.
Thrust against my generous tongue.
Show me the power of your desire
for my oral caress.
My exploring tongue lifts the hood
and finds your smooth firm pearl.
You squeal in that unique way,
signaling that I have found your special spot.
I harden in response.
My jaws protests what my open mouth provides
but I am unrelenting in my gift,
intent only on your fulfillment.
I feel your body tense,
and you are quiet now...
Concentrating... bearing down.
Soon now my love,
ecstasy approaches.
You push hard and fast against my tongue,
shameless in using me
and I so willingly comply
until you cry out...
and in your satisfaction,
I will find mine,
But mine will be the greater.
read them and tell me they're still the same. I take my craft seriously and I have too many ideas and I have too much respect for the art to ever copy someone else's peice. remember read the poems, simular yes (same content) the same no, this is somthing anyone with any intelectual prowess can plainly see .
tinat
07-27-2006, 09:37 AM
ok complex, let me break down what they are saying to you. robert birch did indeed write a poem called bodyscape......which is the one you are comparing to yours. He ALSO wrote a poem called, THE ORAL CARESS, and that poem, is, word for word, the same poem you posted. SO, if you truly take your craft seriously and you TRULY wrote this poem, i'd suggest you contact an attorney regarding suing Mr. Birch for stealing your work. Otherwise, you may want to remove his work before he does the same toward you. and again, here's the link it can be found at.... http://oralcaress.com/poem.htm
The Oral Caress
by
Robert W. Birch
Copyright 2001
Cradled between your tender thighs
I lift you to my mouth.
The abundance of your wetness greets me
and my mouth overflows with your warm essence.
Your sweet taste is on my tongue
and your fragrance delights my senses.
No gentle lick this visit.
No bashful cautious approach
For I wish to consume you.
Push against my hungry mouth
As the tip of my tongue slides up the slippery furrow
that welcomes me between rows of delicate pink petals.
Thrust against my generous tongue.
Show me the power of your desire
for my oral caress.
My exploring tongue lifts the hood
and finds your smooth firm pearl.
You squeal in that unique way,
signaling that I have found your special spot.
I harden in response.
My jaws protests what my open mouth provides
but I am unrelenting in my gift,
intent only on your fulfillment.
I feel your body tense,
and you are quiet now...
Concentrating... bearing down.
Soon now my love,
ecstasy approaches.
You push hard and fast against my tongue,
shameless in using me
and I so willingly comply
until you cry out...
and in your satisfaction,
I will find mine,
But mine will be the greater.
Robert W. Birch, Ph.D.
Copyright 2001 applies to title and poem, all rights reserved.
admin
07-27-2006, 10:08 PM
Thanx Tinat for shedding more light on this issue for Complex . . . I was about to question his level of comprehension!
antoine66
08-09-2006, 01:37 PM
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HARDNOX
08-10-2006, 10:35 AM
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CVanessa
08-18-2006, 08:53 PM
Damn, I was gonna compliment you, too... :smh:
That's bad bizness brutha.. bad business
lamont31
01-19-2007, 10:23 PM
its all good
rastagal
02-03-2007, 04:40 PM
Cradled between your tender thighs
I lift you to my mouth.
The abundance of your wetness greets me
and my mouth overflows with your warm essence.
Your sweet taste is on my tongue
and your fragrance delights my senses.
No gentle lick this visit.
No bashful cautious approach
For I wish to consume you.
Push against my hungry mouth
As the tip of my tongue slides up the slippery furrow
that welcomes me between rows of delicate pink petals.
Thrust against my generous tongue.
Show me the power of your desire
for my oral caress.
My exploring tongue lifts the hood
and finds your smooth firm pearl.
You squeal in that unique way,
signaling that I have found your special spot.
I harden in response.
My jaws protests what my open mouth provides
but I am unrelenting in my gift,
intent only on your fulfillment.
I feel your body tense,
and you are quiet now...
Concentrating... bearing down.
Soon now my love,
ecstasy approaches.
You push hard and fast against my tongue,
shameless in using me
and I so willingly comply
until you cry out...
and in your satisfaction,
I will find mine,
But mine will be the greater.
okay someone wrote the peom so lets just appreciate the beautiful words. the thing is "the poem is damn good" :41: :41: :41: :41: :41:
cozabien500
04-25-2007, 01:43 AM
no com...
ghoststrike
09-14-2007, 07:45 PM
:yay:yay
ericdadrunk
09-14-2007, 09:26 PM
busted!!!!!!!!!!!
sirsexalot
08-02-2008, 03:51 PM
fire pon a bow cat
Glenlivet
08-04-2008, 03:58 PM
*applause* more please lol
sirsexalot
09-01-2008, 01:54 AM
FAIRE PON A BOW CAT
brownbody
09-03-2008, 01:51 AM
its still a great poem and thanks for posting it
kidomaruu
03-12-2009, 01:00 PM
WOW, BITERS in here, Its a nice poem....but not urs......fucking posers!
bathinape
05-09-2009, 03:35 PM
that was nice
ROBERT SHOULD HAVE YOU LOCKED UP
damanrthere
07-20-2009, 08:00 PM
its the world wide web...someone is gonna see u. DAMN
numbaonelova
10-12-2009, 10:16 AM
good shit and he never said it was his
Ye_Yo829
10-17-2009, 04:41 PM
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